The Ghost
by Fyzarl

Comment:
Returning for comment. A good idea. With regard to composition, you might consider cropping out more of the space above the head, so that it appears in the top third of the frame rather than dead center. Overall, stronger than many of the other submissions.

Eachtra
by Rasai

Comment:
Returning for comment. Great capture of facial expression. Focus is a little soft, and this has a snapshot feel to it. Overall, the shot communicates happiness well.

Which I for me today ?
by thewanderer

Comment:
Returning for comment. You got a good idea here. This shot is not in as sharp focus as it could be. The white balance appears to be a little off as well. With regard to composition, there doesn't appear to be a main focal point - my eye kind of keeps wandering around for a place to land. Overall, this was a decent attempt at something creative.

Selfish Portrait III
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
Returning for comment. Excellent character shot. Overall, a little too dark for my personal taste, but at second look am bumping up.

My one half is dark
by Jozi

Comment:
Returning for comment. Interesting composition - you've filled the frame well. This shot might have been stronger if one element had been kept in focus, particularly the eye. Perhaps some light bounced up from below the chin would have helped with the shadows cast by the bangs. The expression in the eye is good.

OH NO , I can't beleive Im dead! !
by RulerZigzag

Comment:
Returning for comment. Sorry - it took me three looks and over 5 minutes to figure out that this was a mirror! OK, I get it now. With regard to composition, it's just a bit too cluttered with competing subjects to be a winner. You had a great idea, and you've mastered the long shutter aspect.

Wondering what he's up to...
by Everyday Renee

Comment:
Returning for comment. Good capture of facial expression. Lighting is not to my personal taste - looks a bit blown out to me as you've lost one of the arms to the window. There doesn't seem to be a clear definition between the earrings and the necklace. Well titled and composed.

Wonderment
by wkoffel

Comment:
Returning for comment. My personal taste does not lean towards high-key, but you've almost convinced me here. Composition is good, expression is good, use of negative space is good. At second look, bumping up.

Untitled
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
Returning for comment. Why not titled? Good capture of facial expression. Use of selective saturation seems random and might not add as much to the shot as you intended. With regard to composition, you might try leaving less negative space on top, so that your eyes are in the top third of the frame. Lighting is good.

candid
by Mark

Comment:
Returning for comment. You've got a great idea here, and compositionally your lines are good. The sky looks a little blown out. Overall, a good concept.