Ringneck portrait in full color
by awrightlpc

Comment:
could be sharper, but nice colour composition. DOF is good, but feels like there is some blurring effect going on in the background which pulls eye away from bird instead of making it the focal point.

Aiden
by cowcollect

Comment:
should crop out the burning along the right side of the tree. models' face could be sharper in detail. fence in background is a bit distracting (both lattice and chain). lighting seems to be quite harsh, as though it was mid-day (noon - 3pm), yet perhaps too soft in the face from the shade of the tree. unfortunately, eyes seem a little darker w/o light.

Dude
by nikuser

Comment:
nice picture, model has a lot of potential. slight burning on left side of face, and right and front side of face could use a little more soft light. nice colours, good composition, i really like the layout and the subtle colours/patterns in the background. 7/10

My Girl
by alison05

Comment:
nice color in the eyes. model appears to be "waiting" for the picture, although the mood has a nice "when is this going to be over with" feel, which is eerily relatable. :) 6/10

Janelle
by chele

Comment:
alot of burning going along her forehead, nose, shoulder and blouse. nice contrast in the wood background. needs a bit more softer light in her eyes. 5/10

Innocence
by Judi

Comment:
not sure of the title, as the expression on her face is almost the opposite. very stern expression on her face. technically perfect, although wish there was a bit more light to bring the blue/grey out of the right eye more. 6/10

Day 1 Portrait
by okiesisi

Comment:
alot of jpeg artifacts in this shot along the baby's forehead.

"Domino"
by tmorninglory96

Comment:
i think the red in this shot really detracts from the final image and gives the dog a bit of a creepy look in the eyes. nose is a tad too dark, eyes could be sharper in focus.

The Cub
by Ironworker

Comment:
cub's face is too soft. lighting could use improvement, most of the picture has a grey-purple cast to it.

Those Eyes
by mystical_princess

Comment:
i think you've used a bit too much blur effect around the nose, as it looks unnaturally wispy. also, eyes need more lighting to really pick out the colour. they seem to be a bit too dark, especially in comparison with the black sweater. colour also seems to be a little "odd", almost as though he is wearing makeup/glamour shot-like.