Line of Shells
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AlbireoComment: Oh My
Er, uhm, well, ok. Sorry, I'm a little intimidated!
*Salut from the critique club!*
You're my first ribboning CC, so, here goes nothing! :)
First off, excellent picture. Nice depth of focus, excellent composition, interesting subject matter, and well lit.
Here are the only things I can find to nit pick about. While I like the shells going from dark to light, did you try it going the other way? I see some nice color gradients in the lighter shells in the background, and I wonder how it would look going from light to dark.
The other, thing, though I don't know if this would work, is to maybe turn the shells ends towards the viewer just a touch so you can see more of the spiral pattern at the shells end.
So, not much to critique on an excellent, well deserved riboon shot.
Good luck, and have you thought about becoming a member? More challenges to enter! :)
Cheers
Pidge