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Desperate Phone Call
05/09/2006 06:37:31 PM
Desperate Phone Call
by talikf

Comment:
This would totally work as a movie poster. I think as has been said before the lighting is great and emotion in the model's face is excellent and doesn't even appear to be acting in the shot. If I had to add any critique to the image it would be that by the wrist it is abit too sharp and has a bit of a halo and on the cheek above the right eye the skin appears to have a alittle bright spots that attract the eye. In most cases it wouldn't matter but movie posters always seem to have the skins tones way over processed. If I was voting I would have voted it an 8 or 9 then sulked on to the next entry thinking about how much better this then my photo for the challenge.
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2.75 Bubbles
05/09/2006 06:01:37 AM
2.75 Bubbles
by aimeethetoo

Comment:
------------****Greetings from the critique club****------------
I think this was a really creative idea for the negative image challenge and you executed your idea very well. As with many images in this challenge with very strong colors after inversion they could be hard to look at and your image is very easy on the eyes and the bubbles make me want to see closer into the them to see the details.

As far as composition goes I think it is really well done. I may have cropped slightly differently by having the bubbles abit higher up and the wand slightly to the right to make use of the rule of thirds. This woud have placed the wand in one of the places the eye is most drawn to and from there it would follow the bubbles. Also I can faintly see some blueish tint in the background underneath the bubbles which can be a small distraction. (Although I didn't notice them at first.)

I think the post processing would have helped your score abit, although I know it is difficult when working with a negative image. I noticed that you used invert to make you image negative. I would suggest using curves instead as it allows you to have more tonal control over the image, you simply change the curves low point to the high point and vice versa or from this / to this \. I hope that makes sense. Your bubbles seems abit overblown and it is hard to distinguish where the bubble ends and the background begins in some parts. Although I am not sure if this was intentional or not I could see voters taking a point away for that. The other thing that really strikes mee is that you are very blue and there is no change in the blue from your hair, shirt and skin tone and I am not sure how that is and perhaps voters who didn't comment may have thought this also and took a point down also. So maybe where shirt that was different than your skin or even some with lots of different colors to see how that would have looked.

Overall I think this image was really well done and as I critiqued it I liked it more. The border I think worked for your image too. The inside of the bubbles are great and it was a creative and well thought out idea. I hope this is helpful to you. If you have any more questions feel free to send me a PM.
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The Circus in town
05/07/2006 04:04:38 PM
The Circus in town
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment:
I wish this shot was just abit wider so that we could have the feet of the trainer and the top of the ringling brothers sign was completely in frame
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Gay Marriage:  Adam and Steve
05/07/2006 03:59:56 PM
Gay Marriage: Adam and Steve
by Sunshine86

Comment:
I think showing the two men's faces would have had more of an impact because it shows they aren't trying to hide from the public, but a great a idea and just a suggestion
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High Temperatures and Spring Rain Flood Valley Floor
05/07/2006 03:56:27 PM
High Temperatures and Spring Rain Flood Valley Floor
by cools98

Comment:
This is a great shot, and the only suggestion I could have would be to maybe shoot at a higher shutter speed so that the water doesn't seem to be so smooth and serene and more chaotic to bring some more dramatic effect.
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Swamp Thing grabs victory again!
05/07/2006 03:54:05 PM
Swamp Thing grabs victory again!
by armin

Comment:
The green grass appears to be glowing from what looks to be abit of over saturation, but I like the stop action of the Swamp Thing
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'Bringing purr therapy to the elderly'
05/07/2006 03:50:49 PM
'Bringing purr therapy to the elderly'
by suemack

Comment:
I think having the elderly man's face would have helped this photo because I feel it would nice to be able to see his reaction to purr therapy
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All good things come to an end
05/05/2006 08:52:28 PM
All good things come to an end
by steinar

Comment:
This is really well done, and I wonder what other poses you tried, I think having the male facing left and the women facing right would have been interesting so that they are facing away from each other. Either way its a great entry
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The Price of Freedom
05/04/2006 04:11:59 PM
The Price of Freedom
by JPR

Comment:
great perspective on this shot. The only improvement I could suggest is that in the soldiers body you can see image noise so maybe running the photo through NI or even running a gaussian blur over the image to smooth it out. But this should do well and my critque had no effect on your score.
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Waiting to be filled..
05/03/2006 11:37:30 PM
Waiting to be filled..
by ibkc

Comment:
I would have tried a larger fstop so we could see the repition more clearly
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