My first habit
by rkfoote

Comment:
I wish you could have found some other way to light this besides the attached flash. The glare on the baby's face spoils the softness of the scene.

My Daily Vice - Take 3 times a day with food
by C-town driver

Comment:
Nice presentation of the subject! I like the way the sunshine makes the ale glow.

I really need to quit.
by awpollard

Comment:
Overall the composition is nice, but you have an unfortunate overlap.
The position of the hot end of the cigarette adds a diluting touch of humor to an otherwise dramatic and intense image. Your beard is on fire!

Nail Biter
by beckettboots

Comment:
I think black-and-white was a poor choice for this shot. Grey skin looks dead. Either sepia tone or full color would have been more appealing. I am impressed by the clear focus and dynamic composition.

Morning at Starbucks: A Daily Ritual
by boomer

Comment:
I like the motion effect of the server behind the counter. It contrasts nicely with the stillness of the people in the foreground. *They* aren't in any hurry. Using the natural lighting with a slow shutter worked great on this.

Always Smiling (no matter what)
by Mark

Comment:
Distrubing image, but the flash was not the right lighting for this. A bounce off the cieling would have created more interesting shadows, and made the image clearer.

The Dying Habbit
by MAK

Comment:
The flash makes this shot look flat. Try disabling your flash, and taking more pictures!

WATCHING
by jimmyxj95

Comment:
Good idea, but I would rather have seen the watcher in focus. Is he naked? Also, he doesn't seem to be watching much, if you had stood on something so that you could see "people level" in the window, the view would be more effective.
The hat and pipe give this a nice surreal Church of the Subgenius touch, but it's not enough to make the image work.

The Harmful Habit of Eating Too Much
by mannjudit

Comment:
A little on the gross side, but effective. I wonder how this shot would have looked from a step to the left, to get that coke umbrella out from behind his head. The heart health t-shirt is a nice ironic touch, well spotted!

No Wonder He's Single
by dovey

Comment:
It took me a while to realize that you were showing the bad habit of leaving the seat up. (and not cleaning the toilet often). There must have been a better way to present this idea. Even indoors, try first to find a way to get the shot whithout using the flash attached to your camera. That practically guarantees flat lighting. Perhaps cropping or zooming in closer on the toilet seat, and getting rid os the extraneous stuff like the sink and trash can. You are off to a good start, but you need to take that little bit of extra thought. Check all the angles, try different lightings.