busicard4 copy.jpg
by zackdezon

Comment:
First impressions:
Text alignment. The word Photography is jsutified right, lined up to the edge of the right picture, yet the email, phone & website seem odd centered.
I know it's a smugmug site, but it's a shame there is a gmail email address - sort of rings to the less than professional side of things.
The images - too lined up maybe, with the portrait in the center being a big too big by comparison to the others. Borders or drop shadows can help make them less sterile there.

Here's what I did based on what you had and ran with it a bit:
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Sort of a balance by imbalance.

Just a 10min dabble...

Reflections in spoons
by IreneM

Comment:
(pressing my automated playback response button)
Congrats on yet another Blue Irene!

Now, come join us in capturing the real world around us. There's all sorts of cool stuff out there like water, landscapes, people, colors, natural abstracts stuff, flowers, feathers, oh heck you are hereby limited to photographing cardboard boxes in a pitch dark room.
;)

Handsome in Velvet
by bergiekat

Comment:
Should have moved that branch that is covering up the back leg.
I know.. I know.. - details. Easy to miss doing a shoot.
:P

Stairway to Heaven
by bergiekat

Comment:
Stairway to heaven perhaps?

Centrifugal Force
by thelazy8

Comment:
The centrifugal force does not act on the body in motion; the only force acting on the body in motion is the centripetal force.
I know, I'mma geek.

Welcome to My World
by Jutilda

Comment:
Oreck huh?
Left out one important part - your curlers!
I knew we'd be neck & neck based on the thread, but thought I'd be on the other side of you.
Next time you can be on top. (did I actually say that?)

Just Me
by Judi

Comment:
"Just"
HA - nothing "just" about you!
I nearly didn't recognize you in clothes, but I suspected it was you cuz' your hair's on fire!

Clerk
by IreneM

Comment:
It's a pen!
(I scratched my head trying to figure out what it was - looked like an eye)
Congrats on yet another blue ribbon Irene!

My only nit here is that it lacks soul. Creative, beautifully composed & lit, but it's sterile (to me anyway)
Come on out in the real world and take snapshots with the rest of us - lol.

Photographer
by jeger

Comment:
Great composition, sense of scale and presence!
Congrats on 2nd place! Perfect shutter speed too.

2012 Olympic Hopeful
by LVicari

Comment:
Superb determination caught here!
Congrats on your top 5 finish.