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| 08/08/2004 04:03:14 PM |
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| 08/08/2004 12:55:28 PM |
Drop Polluting Conquerorby tyrkinnComment: Hi Haraldur and Greetings from the Critique Club.
The DPC band challenge was an awesome collection of imaginative and creative submissions. So first, please don't feel bad about your placement - the competition was fierce.
Your image has a lot going for it - a nice idea, well laid out. The placement of the single blue drop is great.
The things that detract from the image is the focus and lighting.
You shot at f4.0 which cased a really shallow depth of field. If you have a tripod, try the same shot again, but taken at the highest aperture you have. Or, try to shoot so that all the pearl drops are about the same distance from the focal plane. (More of a looking down from the top perspective.)
The harsh lighting caused many areas of over exposed highlights or glares. Instead of a halogen light, could you take the studio setup outside - or at least close to an outside window? The lighting should be less harsh and should remove the really bright areas.
Keep shooting and entering.
-Tom- |
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| 08/08/2004 12:12:21 PM |
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| 08/08/2004 12:09:50 PM |
Stripesby melismaticaComment: Nice seeing - I like what you've done. The red mesh on the right is a perfect touch, |
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| 08/08/2004 12:02:39 PM |
?by pique_moiComment: Nice graphics, shapes and colors. The reflected(?) sky and clouds add impact. The title implies it is mysterious - which it certainly is. |
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| 08/08/2004 12:00:23 PM |
Clearly Blueby dahvedComment: Your color selection is perfect, nice blues and reds. Compositionally, you've included too much stuff. Try the same shot without so many pieces. |
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| 08/08/2004 11:57:22 AM |
Juliet's Last Breathby mocabelaComment: Great concept that works very well in black and white. The B&W rally makes the blue stand out. Composition bothers me - it seems awkward - and very crowded at the top. |
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| 08/08/2004 11:54:14 AM |
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| 08/08/2004 11:51:41 AM |
Walking on a Cloudby BassieComment: Clever - lots of blue and lots of interest. It may be a bit stroger with about 1/2 (or more) of the area above the shoe cropped out. That way the shoe would be close to the top instead of dead center. |
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| 08/08/2004 11:48:28 AM |
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