DSCF4530
by primabarbara

Comment:
I like the idea but the last image is probably my least favorite of the set. The first and last images are arguably the most important for a photo essay. Maybe end with a picture, taken outside your house, with illuminated windows? I'd also like a few more to set the mood. That kitchen shot with a slice of light is fabulous.

edit: oops posted this on your last image.

Message edited by author 2016-09-04 11:30:16.

Venetian-Red.1
by mariuca

Comment:
Nice eclectic collection of images sharing the common theme of red. As always, your images offer enough for the curious. Picasso saw the world through this filter for a few periods. Very nice!

1-South End of Forest Ave at Osborne St P7037534sm
by tvsometime

Comment:
Mariuca summed up my thoughts on your essay. My eye, camera if I was carrying one, would have been drawn to similar things. A lovely walk down Forest Ave. Forest and Bay truly make a wonderful intersection.

Roaring
by herfotoman

Comment:
Been on a hiatus from the essays so I'm a little behind on commenting. I really enjoyed this experience you shared with us. I doubt I'll ever have a chance to see/hear this in person. What an amazing world we live in.

Video with audio is something I've wanted to try. Thanks for the inspiration!

Kanu 2
by primabarbara

Comment:
Gorgeous place! Who wouldn’t enjoy a day on this pristine lake.

Nice collection of memories without being redundant. Such a lovely palette of blues. I like how you presented different perspectives, from landscapes to dripping paddles. I also enjoyed your your last image, leaving the lake with your canoe pointing home.

Some of the close up studies seem a little out of focus. Were these an afterthoughts that you cropped?

whites of their eyes
by daisydavid

Comment:
William S. Burroughs comes to mind. Nice work!

Mysterious
by grahamgator

Comment:
Beautiful noir portrait. Congratulations!

Feral Cats
by GeorgesBogaert

Comment:
Under appreciated. Terrific photograph!

private lives
by mariuca

Comment:
Congratulations! That impeccably placed hula hoop manhole cover. Lovely conversation.

the shop
by Tiberius

Comment:
The convenience of a cell phone. Nicely caught!