Levitate
by purpleflutterby13

Comment:
Hi Purp,
Sorry about the delay, I did it twice went to have a smoke and go logged out...lol. Nice capture, I like the composition here the shadow as a leedin works really well here the placement of your subject is just right any futher up in the frame and I feel it would have had that condensed look. You have just the right balance of people in the background and all doing different things, any more and the capture would have looked overwelhming. The only thing I didn't like & I feel hurts the capture just a bit is the gentleman to the right of he frame, ( the guy cut in half ) other wise the compostion is very well done. Your exposure is nice, nice tonel ranges. The only thing disruptive is at the right of the frame between the children down to your subjects feet and leeding out of the frame has lost it detail due to the washout (sun) Im talking about the ground portion here. I like the fact that you showed us a building ( the corner ) so we know its a building this was a nice touch. In the capture itself if you look on the sign pole 2/3 the way up I don't know what it is, a white box very distracting & just below the white line looks like pipe on the building but it is way out of contrast to the rest of the building. The last is the title, is he levitateing ?. The first thing any good judge looks at is, does the title match the capture They will hammer you if it does not, I know, it has happen to me twice &I personally know two state judges here in Nevada that are very picky on capture & title. Other wise I love the capture, A great piece of work, street captures are to m he toughest photograph there is and you did a great job captureing the ENTIRE seen.I think you have a sellable capture here. Again Great Work here.

Frankie/Las Vegas

Lakeston Muffler Santa Claus: "Silent Night, Every Night!" (Pop Art/Georgia Culture)
by 777STAN

Comment:
Hi 777,
Over all I love the shot nice detail, rich color. Three things do bother me two of them not much you can do about. The phone line (white) running through the photo. The red fenceing chopping off his legs & the bottom of the tree, & the sky, just get the sence something is missing a cloud moving by or something. Other wise very nice.

American Chopper
by Johnnyflash

Comment:
Morning Flash,
Concept is nice, to much grunge. The building looks out of place along with the tires on the rare of the trailer. The piece of paper in the back ground in front of building is distracting. The wind sheild on the other bike gives the impression it is dirty, not grunge. The back ground is to busy eye keeps wondering. The black line along his leg takes out part of his leg. I would have liked to see more detail in the bike & he seems distracted by something to his right.

Frankie

*POP* Culture
by tapeworm_jimmy

Comment:
Morning Tapeworm,
The concept is nice the photo is terrible. I looks like and x-ray gone bad. Your black & White tonel rangers are way off. The Light kills to much of the details in the shirt and whatever you used to lift the inside look like the x-ray one bad. Also the neck is very distracting not sure what it is but my eye is constintly drawn to it trying to figure out what it is. Nice effort though.

Peace, Love, and Rock 'n Roll
by maxaz1

Comment:
Hi Maxaz1
Love the shot. Only thing I would hve done differently was the chain. I would have snaked it between the eyes and around the nose or had it look like they were wareing it. Other wise what can I say great Photograp.

Frankie

The Pitch
by madcrabber

Comment:
Hello madcrabber,
Over all I like the shot. Color, depth of field, details are all nice and sharp. There is one thing here that needs addressing. The bottom of the photo, The pitchers plant foot abrutly ends the photo he has know where to go on the follow through. This gives us the (OPTICAL) sense that he is either going to hit a wall or diappear from the game. If we included more of the mound giving his follow through foot someplace to land this would complete the scene you are trying to capture. If you have trouble understanding what I am convaying here e-mail me and I will explain further

Frankie?/Las Vegas

Holding the shed up
by Grandad

Comment:
Hello Grandad,
There are a few things I would like to point out here. First, the face board on the roof, it gives the (optical) impression that it is coming out of your should & again at head level. By moving a step or two to your right would reslove this. Secondly, the pad lock again gives the (optical) impression that it it hanging from your arm, not the door. The watch on your arm there is giving off some glare that is a we bit distracting. Finally the lighting, you could have used a reflector or bounced some flash off the barn at an angle fro below to lighten up the shadow on you face. Over all I like the shot. Hope these little tid bits hlp you out.

Frankie/Las Vegas

Michele, ma belle
by pipersd

Comment:
Hello,
what can I say nice shot, Jst wish her eyes were open more, those blues eyes really would have made this perfect.

Frankie

Missing Him
by posthumous

Comment:
Hi,
I like the compostion of the shirt as it relates to th door. Two things I noticed, If you look at the left shoulder you can see the green and purple strips. On the right side they seem washd out. This could be one of two things the light from the flash light washed it a bit or the photo is a we bit under exposed. The other is the door handle if you look at it, it seem to be a bit out of focus, a 1/2 a step backward should help with the depth of field. Over all I like it nice shot.

Frankie

Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment:
The Border Kills the photo. Big time distraction.