Botanical Discovery
by notbiscuit

Comment:
lots of lines here. unfortunately those center columns seem to block the movement you're trying to create. i wish you had found a nice focal point, perhaps some flowers and found a line leading to them...perhaps some of the shadows created by these lines would have done the trick.

Baseline Runners
by whatdewuc

Comment:
nice motion. i would have gone with one or the other child, and i would have erred on the side of cute. It looks like your bg is overexposed and you magnified the problem by having to dodge the trees to make the kids stand out. next time try a very wide aperture if your camera allows it to blur out the bg details

Leading Lights
by GinaRothfels

Comment:
good focus. you probably have your reasons for this layout, but i can't help but wonder if centering the middle pole wasn't possible, by stepping to the right. Also i would have cloned out the clouds as they only distract. think it could have used a bit more contrast aswell

Serenity
by sheapod

Comment:
good tones, a touch soft. daring to follow an IR winner with an IR shot. based on the challenge i know that you were shooting a line of trees but your composition doesn't give me a strong focal point. i think you want me looking at the second big tree, though i'm not sure why

Popsicles
by bucket

Comment:
clever idea. tough break on the blown out shirt, as it's kind of distracting. composition if controllable, i would have gone with her arm out of the pic and his popicle arm up more to match hers. colors are very nice

Line to the Lady
by toddhead

Comment:
wonderful clarity. the fill flash works for me. i'm not so sure about the composition. I would have at least saved her feet and lost the grass. not sure what to do in the current surroundings, maybe with her back on the other wall with a bent leg to mimic the triangle in the slope

Wykeham Walk
by bicray

Comment:
nice composition. i think it could have used a bit more contrast to help pull out more of your stone's texture.

Replaced by the Tucson
by jbsmithana

Comment:
the texture on the boat is very cool. there was another photo in the challenge of a brick wall that leads to a house. i think if you had chosen an angle similiar to that and gotten macro close to the foreground boat and managed to keep the other one blurred in the background, you'd have something that better led the eye and better exposed that wonderful texture

Protest Line
by Seanachai

Comment:
i like the idea. the focus and clarity are fantastic. i'm not sure the issue lends itself well to a pristine street and a suburbia like setting. maybe getting in their faces might have changed the drama of the pic, though not good for showing a leading line. i actually just noticed the "leading line". i might have focused on the right half of the pic.

Leading to a Future Together
by L1

Comment:
nice processing. very dreamlike. i'd clone out the leg in the front row.