Bath Time
by sempermarine

Comment:
top shot this. This is a keeper and be sure to bring it out on his 21st and every time he brings a new girlfriend home! It would been interesting to see if you can colour pop the blue eyes to see what it looks like. Also you may want to doge ( a little bit) his right eye to make it match the other.

jax&trunks.jpg
by Eagle40Fox2

Comment:
Nice shot I don't know if this should be a dog portrait or a portrait with a person and a dog. The other commenters might be right saying it is slightly too warm, though the model might have a tan so I cannot tell. I would have tried to get you model to look straight into the dogs eyes to give some extra contact and maybe tried to get the dog to look right at the camera, though that can be tough.

Day Four
by LMA128

Comment:
Nice shot the tilted camera angle works well here. You really have done a good job with the eyes, the only draw back is light source blocking part of them. There are also a couple of loose hairs on the right hand side of his face you might want to remove if this was a magazine shot.

Antar Singh
by bnilesh

Comment:
Nice shot. I have heard of that trick where you give them a prop and they relax and act natural. It is good to see that it works. I like how it is used as a leading line. Maybe you should have used something like f11 to get the hand in focus as well then in photoshop blur the background to what it is now. I would have shot from slightly higher up to the stick covers up the top of the line of rocks in the back ground.

Jan 01 2010
by JaimeVinas

Comment:
really nice shot. Even though her face does look a bit unnatural (compared to her shoulders) being so pale I like it as it reminds me of the Oriental white face paint they they used to use a lot. I personally feel that he head is tilted a little bit too far. In the head of the moment its always hard to look at the details but there is something white in her hair and there is a smudge (i think) above her left eye.

Look into the eyes.......
by kingskingdom

Comment:
really good shot with good post production. The thing I like the most is her eyes very well done there. If I am hyper critical I would say that you have over smoothed her skin (unless that is the look you were going for), her fringe is rather messy compared to the rest of the shot and looks out of place, maybe you need a brush and mirror on set for those sorts of things.

Old Man
by gsal

Comment:
really lovely shot. 91 huh i am going to start walking twice a day now so I look as good at that age. I really like how you have composed the shot though I am not a big fan of the extra black boarder (maybe its just me) and you have some white spots to clean up along the top edge. I would like to see this shot with not so much contrast just to see if that gives the face some extra character.

zoe-xmas-09.jpg
by hesitant

Comment:
Really nice family shot. It has a real pro feel to it with the grey back drop. Thats a good idea may be I should paint one of my walls grey so I can do the same!
From a photography perspective I would try to boost her eyes a little bit, slightly whiten the teeth and maybe use my magic wand to clear away some of the loose hair in the top left corner. At the time of shot I would have the model (your daughter) to pull back those two long strands on the right of her face. Then again she might want them there after all what do I know about womens hair.

In the Eyes of a Child
by denbote

Comment:
really good pic this one. If I am looking at this with a very critical eye might say that the leading shoulder is slightly washed out. I would also try desaturating the reds of the door frame a touch to see if it helps tell the story.

Smoke Break
by Jedusi

Comment:
I really like your shot here. I don't think it is your best one that you took for the D-Day collection though with the smoke it does have a real 30/40's feel. I would have tried for a darker background but with the smoke that might be slightly hard.