Michelle
by Pedro

Comment:
This should have been taken with a lower angle, not that much from above, more straight to the model's face, not bad.

Inviting
by jerowe

Comment:
It looks like the aperture here is too large, more of the models face in focus would be better, or with as shallow dof as this the focus should be on her left eye not the nose. The light is a bit too yellow as you have probably just used a regular lamp, you could fix this in Photoshop. Hence this I like the framing and the expression of the model, don't take me wrong, this is not a bad photo in whole.

Snips & Snails...
by lauraodom

Comment:
This looks like a colored portrait from maybe 40-50 years ago... the colors and everything makes this look very old, like from 1950-60. That is not bad, but I just had to mention it. Good photo.

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment:
My comment might seem to be a little strange but I think this model needs to have more simplicity in her clothes, she has very clean face with long straight hair, a green simple dress or maybe red would have made this photo much better, also just a regular umbrella, maybe red or white with white background. I think the pictures in the umbrella and the shirt don't match with the whole, at least not the shirt, but the model is very nice and the lighting is good.

Message edited by author 2006-04-26 13:37:00.

Abby
by woohoopepper

Comment:
Although the girl is smiling, it looks like she's not comfortable enough and relaxed. Not bad in whole though.

An English Rose
by judojoe

Comment:
This is very nice but would be better if the girl would have looked to the left of the camera instead of the right, then her face would be better lit. But very nice setup.

Valerie
by love

Comment:
This photo lacks focus on the model's face and the background should be more blurred. placing the model further from the background could help and a use of smaller aperture setting if possible.. The position of the model is ok.

"Amanda'
by tfarrell23

Comment:
the colors seems to be way off, the face is too red and the white in the eyes is blue... better luck next time.. ;)

Pink Feather Boa
by twm122

Comment:
Cute model, ok lighting but the shutter speed seems to be a bit too slow

In my Fabulous World
by ladibug

Comment:
this is a good shot, the background is very good and the position of the boy. I like it.