gas lamp
by tiby_dicu

Comment:
I think you did a great job on the lamp itself, but the niche/window/shelf that it is on takes away from it. It's so dark behind it, but the wall is so white it's distracting. I think you could have cropped a lot of the extra window out, changed the angle slightly, and it would make a huge difference in making the lamp 'pop'.

Public telephone booth
by mitalapo

Comment:
Great job. I love the touches like the hat pushed back and the papers blown against the booth - it gives a kind of forlorn look to it - stranded in the rain or something along those lines.

"Everyone set? Good, no stopping until we get to grandma's"
by vawendy

Comment:
The best part of this photo is that it tells a complete story even without the title. Fantastic job. The focus on the bear with the car almost out of the frame makes it all click. 10

Good Ole Cub
by gsal

Comment:
I'm guessing that the tractor is the focus of the photo. In that case, my suggestion would be to change up the angle on it, or crop in tighter - the rest of the landscape are distracting from it. I can see why it would be your subject. It's really cool.

Dot Matrix Paper
by Lonni

Comment:
Very cool. I love the abstract look and feel of this. Great photo.

''Nan's Old Cameo"
by Crafty

Comment:
This is really simple and pretty. However, the lighting is washing out the portrait, and reflecting too much on the metal which exaggerates the soft focus. The detail on it is beautiful - I don't think it needs a soft focus.

1940s News Source
by Balko

Comment:
I love this photo. There's a lot to look at, but I couldn't name one thing that's distracting. The only thing I would change is the lighting. It looks as though it was taken with natural light during the day. Unfortunately, I think it's just a bit too bright. Still a great photo!

remember Gilad Shalit - 997 days in captivity
by Oded

Comment:
Nice job. You've caught a lot of emotion and action without it looking random. I think the face of the woman in the front is an anchor for the crowd, which pulls it all together.

Old Oil Lamp
by drewhosick

Comment:
It seems a little flat. The lamp is really cool, but it just doesn't pop. Still - the composition is good, and I like the angle and crop.

Human Aided Design
by LaMas

Comment:
I love the simplicity of this, but my eye is being drawn a bit to the heavy shadows. Still a great photo - nice interpretation and composition.