Walk the Line
by oilofole

Comment by ganne:
I liked the concept but I see unwanted cars and light near subject head is little off.

Walk the Line
by oilofole

Comment by piaffe529:
Would of liked the model to be a little sharper.

Walk the Line
by oilofole

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
This could be an excellent image if the girl was more in focus and lit better

Picture Day
by oilofole

Comment by Claya:
Certainly meets the challenge but not very interesting composition, just documents who was in the class. Focas and lighting seem just a bit off too.

look both ways
by oilofole

Comment by tjbel05:
good photo, too bad headlights are reflecting in the middle of your sign.

look both ways
by oilofole

Comment by macrothing:
4 - Mostly for the potential - Good idea. I think many will 'miss' your 'effect' here, I nearly did. Criticism; mainly the composition and the reflections. If the 'ghostly figure' was either further into the frame, or else the frame cropped, a little more of the car perhaps, and the sign especially (as that is what the Challenge is about) 'placed' better within the overall framing/composition (in this case likely 'left'), the reflections on the sign diminished (difficult, both for 'basic editing' and the actual shooting/location) and cropping out/eliminating the upper left 'green sign' - all have made this much better in my opinion. Also, given the 'vertical nature' of the two main subjects, perhaps a vertical framing may have worked better, but I realize you've tried to incorporate the 'crosswalk'.

look both ways
by oilofole

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice idea, and pretty good execution. Sharp, bright background on left draws attention away from the main scene. Would be better framed so person is more primary.

Mrs. Ed
by oilofole

Comment by Jutilda:
Oh this has a very sweet sense. I like the fuzzy background. What is on her head? Did she walk through something and it got caught in her main?? I feel as if she's walking up to say hello. That slight cock to her head is cute. I might remove part of the area to the right so she's not quite so centered. Overall, quite appealing to this animal lover!! 7

True American Heroes
by oilofole

Comment by qbicle:
I like this pictures message. One suggestion might be to blur the background some (not so much that you can't tell there is a fire truck though) and take a tighter crop. This could help to make the main fireman really standout.

True American Heroes
by oilofole

Comment by MayaM:
This would have been a beautiful shot. The composition is very nice, but it is a bit underexposed and the focus is not quite there.