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Challenge: Hope (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-4000Z
Location: Living room
Date: Aug 24, 2004
Aperture: 1/2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/4
Galleries: Family
Date Uploaded: Aug 24, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 236 out of 285
Avg (all users): 4.3688
Avg (commenters): 5.2308
Avg (participants): 4.2441
Avg (non-participants): 4.4710
Views since voting: 777
Views during voting: 408
Votes: 282
Comments: 15
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 09/01/2004 08:08:13 PM
Well it is my highest scorer to date. I am slowly improving, I think. Thanks to all for the constructive comments.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/31/2004 09:55:02 PM
Flair in the backgroung really messes up your picture. Whats that white thing on the girls ankle. This is digital. Re-shoot your images.
 08/31/2004 09:25:12 PM
This reminds me of my sister and I, minus 25 years. :) Thanks for the memory. :)
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 08/31/2004 12:38:56 PM
I don't like the cropping. You should have cropped around the girls so you would not see the giant spot light in the background.
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 08/28/2004 10:13:47 PM
Beautiful picture
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 08/28/2004 12:00:42 AM
I like the subject a lot. Just wish the flash reflection was not there.
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 08/27/2004 09:37:11 PM
setup needs more work
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 08/27/2004 02:01:49 PM
needs tighter crop, getting rid of the distracting bg.
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 08/26/2004 06:20:12 PM
Sweet picture. I also like the red dresses against the blue sofa. I would suggest cropping it closer to the girls and trying to unclutter the background.
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 08/25/2004 02:13:56 PM
Flash reflection is a major distraction, along with lens flare, focus is off. Probably would of been better with a tighter crop. Also kinda a stretch as far as meeting the challenge.
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 08/25/2004 09:31:26 AM
You could have taken a little different angle and cropped a little not to show the whole light setup.. if you wanted to show 'light' as hope, then only some rays could have worked
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 08/25/2004 08:58:46 AM
The little girls' expressions are great. I think the glaring light at the top of the frame detracts from the shot.
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 08/25/2004 06:14:07 AM
Very nice! Would have been better without the flash glare. The children are angels!
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 08/25/2004 03:57:05 AM
it seems just a snapshot. And getting rid of the reflection in the background would make it wormer and give it more feeling
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 08/25/2004 01:00:05 AM
the girl on the viewer's right and in the foreground is a little too out of focus and the light really distracts me. Good concept though.
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