I'm thinking it might have done better with a crop (or a clean PPly) of the "dirty" belly.
(or maybe the multi-colored splotches are only on my monitor)
Great fashion portrait! I like how her gloves, hat and tattoo coordinate, and also like her expression and hair.
A few things to improve though (IMO). You can just barely see what looks to be a bellybutton piercing, and its rather distracting. I would have cropped that out. Second, I would have blurred the skin of your model on the darker side of her face. The lighting makes it look like its either super noisy or she has uneven skin. A simple blurring would have rectified that. But anyways, great picture! 7
ohh seductive, grungy, sexy, temptress and love the tattoos, suicide girl worthy , love the eye make up false eyelashes and lip liner but maybe a darker lip liner would have continued the theme a little more. being nitty picky for comment not score arms arent centred, small bit of poky dot pant on right waist is little distracting and maybe had liked a little more light on her left eye to see the beauty spots. good effort though 8