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08/24/2004 01:32:03 PM |
focus should be more of an issue in a shot like this. |
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08/23/2004 09:17:59 PM |
Cut back on the noise, focus a little better and bump the saturation (maybe not depending on how good the first two things would make it look) and this would be a lot stronger. 5 - for not taking a picture of a neon sign (thank you for that). |
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08/22/2004 02:18:16 AM |
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08/20/2004 10:35:56 AM |
This one's kind of nauseating if you scroll up and down the page really quickly :) |
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08/18/2004 07:27:10 PM |
Could have been a bit sharper. |
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08/18/2004 01:27:14 PM |
Very nice abstract study. I like the subtle play of light on the coils. Or at least the appearance of light. A second glance makes me think the coils are somewhat marblelized. Either way, it works. |
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08/18/2004 12:05:08 PM |
I like it! I remember these from a kid! -9 |
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08/18/2004 07:09:01 AM |
If this were more sharp it would be a great image to me. The washed out color and unsharp lines detract significantly. When composing an image with simpler design elements I think it's important to have them very clear. By simple I mean that you have 6 similar springs as opposed to a landscape, or an intricate flower. Hope this is helpful! |
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08/18/2004 02:30:08 AM |
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