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08/24/2004 07:32:47 PM |
*Critique Club*
Hi there. The first thing I notice about this shot is the lighting and color. I'm thinking the 2 go hand in hand here. Seems unnaturally orange/yellow ish. Unlike some of the people, I like the sidewalk in the front. I think that's a nice angle, and definatley portrays the vanishing point here.
There is nothing about the shot that makes me jump out of my seat with excitement, however, it is a well composed shot in my opinion. I'm thinking that I might have cropped the bright lights out of the shot. Maybe cropped right below the bottom light. I think that crop works for me. I wonder how this would be if taken during the day. I'm not thinking that the night shot is really adding to this shot for me.
I think that the post at the very end of the sidewalk is interesting. Kind of shows how far away into the distance your 'vanishing point' can go.
Overall, I think it could be more interesting with a slightly different crop, and taken during the daytime. ~Heather~
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08/17/2004 09:42:22 PM |
| I like the colors on this, I just wish there was about half as much sidewalk at the bottom of the photo. |
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08/17/2004 08:43:37 PM |
| I think this picture would look more natural if the ground were darker relative to the lights. This looks like a daylight shot with lights on or a "night for day" through long exposure. |
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08/16/2004 01:41:58 AM |
| Noting in this image captures my attention. There is too much space at the front that isn't doing anything for the image and the colors are hideous. |
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08/11/2004 09:50:38 PM |
| There's too much empty-ness in the foreground - all the interesting stuff is "squashed" at the top. Also, the bright lights are distracting. |
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08/11/2004 12:51:49 PM |
| The streetlamps are distracting and pull the upwards, away from the focus point. |
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08/11/2004 07:26:39 AM |
| I love this nightshot, great colours! |
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08/11/2004 01:20:02 AM |
| I really like the colors and contrast used here. Good perspective, too. |
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