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Challenge: Vanishing Point (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: UEA
Date: Aug 7, 2004
Aperture: f8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Aug 9, 2004

Taken on a hike to the University of East Anglia to shoot the dorms for the vanishing points challenge. In the end this shot of the stage at the UEA more closely fitted the challenge. I'm putting my money on this being my highest scoring sho at dpc :)

Lightly cropped using layers to boost the already blue shot but could nothing about the jagged lines.

Statistics
Place: 134 out of 245
Avg (all users): 5.1118
Avg (commenters): 5.3750
Avg (participants): 5.0859
Avg (non-participants): 5.1307
Views since voting: 973
Views during voting: 389
Votes: 304
Comments: 12
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08/05/2009 07:20:24 AM
It has taken us a scant five years to get to your photo, but at long last the Critique Club has dredged it back up. Being a member has its perks, I guess :)
Your entry was quite fitting for the challenge, with strong leading lines and a menacing façade that stretches off seemingly forever. The centered composition is alright, though I think I would prefer either a symmetrical approach or an uncentered composition. One thing that might have made this quite interesting visually, and likely made it border on an abstraction, would be to have shot the photo in a landscape format and then positioned the tip of the structure at the edge, but uncentered. Not necessarily on the thirds, but just so that it wasn’t centered. This would almost give the impression of a long hallway if you used the white portion for it, and the dark side would have been equally obscure looking.
As others noted, the blue is a bit intense for my taste, as well, and as you noted, you’ve got some aliasing going on there. We’ll blame that on antiquated software compression algorithms ;)
I can’t make up my mind how I feel about the fragment of cloud on the left. It’s interesting in that it seems very much like an element from an impressionist painting due to the way that it is so saturated and distinct, having very little transition of tone. The shape helps this effect too. But then it also seems a bit distracting… but balances out that side, which is lower. Like I said, can’t make up my mind.
As an aside, it’s kinda neat to get such an old image for CC, especially for a still active member. Seeing the evolution is definitely encouraging. It’s also interesting because it really shows how comparatively short a time I’ve spent here.
-Derek
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09/16/2004 08:38:53 PM
I hope you didn't lose your shirt on this one...LOL your comment says " I'm putting my money on this being my highest scoring sho at dpc :"

Well you kicked my butt...I tried to stay away from the obvious VP too but it got trashed. The blue is a little over processed as you already know from the other comments. I think you composition is a little too centered the triangular shapes to the right are distracting. Positioning your shot a third to the right would eliminated these shapes bringing the blue lines from the left into focal points (rule of thirds)and also allowing for more detail from the clouds in the sky. But a great subject none the less.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/17/2004 01:49:04 PM
Nicely done. A tad too bright for me, though.
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08/14/2004 03:23:52 PM
Excellent abstract image. The blue just makes it really stand out. I think that the clouds on the right hand corner disrupts the great shapes presented. "9"
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08/13/2004 06:08:17 PM
good picture, great combination
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08/12/2004 01:07:44 PM
This looks like a candidate for neon, I feel that the screaming blue color against the screaming white makes it a little uncomfortable to look at, but the clouds in the sky in the upper left corner is almost the only details here, good composition would like to see it with more details, Good luck
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08/12/2004 11:21:07 AM
The saturation is distracting, tone it down a bit. Nice lines, a bit of jagging from compression.
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08/12/2004 10:09:21 AM
good contrast - deep blue
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08/12/2004 03:45:34 AM
slightly on the oversaturated side for me personally
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08/12/2004 02:33:36 AM
I like your take on the challenge.
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08/11/2004 09:50:23 AM
Nice abstraction. A little too over-saturated for my taste, especially because the building disolves into the sky at one point near the top.
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08/11/2004 09:22:13 AM
too much blue
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