I like how the woman looks in the background, but would ahve liked a little more contrast in the background. Offices do tend to be that shade of off white though.
It's a shame the subject is looking out of the frame, instead of into it. It's not a bad slice of life, but the composition just doesn't work for me on this image. (and more bokeh would have been good, as it is, the background looks a touch cluttered..) 6 for creative effort and reasonable technical aspects.