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08/07/2011 12:52:55 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
This is a pretty effect. The 'flower' and its glow against the wall work really well and I like the overall coloration too. I do think this might work better with a much lower exposure - I note your aperture is set to f/3.5 and can't wondering how it would have looked at f/8 and 30 seconds.... I know'd you'd have lost the bottom of the vast then, but a brief sweep with the match lower down the image to finish off would probably have worked.
Overall, I like it very much as a concept but feel that the highlights from the top of the vase down would look better suppressed a little.
Nice though.
Paul |
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08/01/2011 12:27:54 AM |
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07/31/2011 11:06:37 PM |
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07/31/2011 09:03:33 PM |
| original, creative and well done. a little bright. 8 |
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07/29/2011 01:03:31 PM |
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07/26/2011 01:07:07 AM |
| Maybe a bit bright, but LOVE how the stem comes out of the vase and the fact it looks like some kid drew a flower on the wall... and hey I guess an orange wall is bright anyway! |
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07/25/2011 12:49:45 AM |
| clever. I like this a lot. I wonder if a dark blue background might improve it? |
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