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Freedom
Brenna Kimi


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Motion (Classic Editing)
Camera: Intel CS630
Location: across the street
Date: Dec 8, 2002
Galleries: Emotive, Action
Date Uploaded: Dec 8, 2002

There can be no limits.

Those who have lived and die for this nation did so to allow this flag to continue to fly. In her gentle motion lies the blood and tears of millions of men and women. Never forsake her nor take her for granted. She will protect us all our days.

Statistics
Place: 164 out of 167
Avg (all users): 2.9703
Avg (commenters): 3.2500
Avg (participants): 3.0190
Avg (non-participants): 2.9313
Views since voting: 1180
Votes: 236
Comments: 17
Favorites: 0


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12/17/2002 09:01:46 AM
Critique club
Hi there Brenna,

Well, I am sure you gathered from the comments that this was a bit small and people couldn't make out what you were photographing. The composition is a bit too clustered, so the main point isn't obvious. It is hard to see that there is a flag here, partly to do with the motion but also the angle isn't great. If you had taken a picture of it from the front and used a slightly faster shutter speed, cropping out the background to focus on the subject and get rid of the bright light, I think it would have done much better. Good Luck in the future.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/15/2002 04:48:04 PM
Perhaps... a bit hard to see.
12/14/2002 11:38:08 PM
1)Does the photo fit the challenge?(4)
2)Color(4)
3)Composition(3)
4)Focus(2)
5)Background(3)
6)Lighting(3)
7)Title(4)

Overall Score:3.24 rounded to 3

Commentary:
Sorry about this. I Realize it is a flag, but that is all I realize. This is not a print I would hang in my living room. That is basically my grading system. Would I hang this in my house on the wall for all to see. Something that is going to represent a 3D world in a 2D photo.
12/13/2002 05:56:22 AM
Way too small, its more of a thumbnail than a photo.
12/12/2002 12:25:50 PM
I can't really make out what this is, and the small dimensions don't help. :-( 2
12/11/2002 10:49:28 PM
Too small, and I can't tell what it is!!
12/11/2002 08:33:20 PM
I'm not sure what I'm looking for here. I s that a book?
12/11/2002 07:19:13 PM
It's difficult to just this picture when it's so small. This size should only be used for pictures with much less detail (in my opinion anyway).
12/10/2002 02:29:41 PM
Pic is too small. I see the motion, and you have the stationary reference point, but the size makes it hard to see.
12/10/2002 02:01:45 AM
what
12/09/2002 11:50:48 PM
too small... I can't tell what's in this shot...
12/09/2002 10:07:11 PM
Too blurred to have any impact....Cub
12/09/2002 12:36:13 PM
So much out of focus to me. I'm guessing there is a flag in there. The hot spot in the corner is distracting.
12/09/2002 12:05:17 PM
I do not know what this is, or is supposed to be. Plus, the size is a little bit small. jgillard2
12/09/2002 09:03:20 AM
its hard to discern what the subject is
12/09/2002 07:10:08 AM
Whilst it clearly depicts motion, the problem is that to the casual observer (ie: me), it's impossible to tell what's actually been captured.
12/09/2002 01:09:31 AM
too small... i can't really see what i'm supposed to see here maybe... - setzler


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