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08/17/2004 11:32:31 PM |
| to bad the grass is bent across the road, somewhat distracting. |
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08/15/2004 10:18:51 PM |
| In my humble opinion, if you would have moved to the left to include more of the rode (to lead the viewer down it. . . and gotten that reed out of the way) and gotten down a little lower, you would have increased the dramatic impact of this image tremendously. I am not so sure that you need that much of the farm land on the right showing. best of luck. |
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08/15/2004 10:20:57 AM |
| Een Hollands plaatje toevallig? :-) |
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08/12/2004 02:01:46 PM |
This photo could be improved by not cropping off the top of the tree, moving in front of that out of focus weed in the foreground (though I think if there was a bunch and not just one it could have worked), and cropping out the sign on the left which disrupts the otherwise rural feel. A nice sunset or sunrise sky would be a plus too.
That said, it's a beautiful scene. The colors are lovely, the rows of trees and the canals on either side of the road all really emphasize the vanishing point.
Good, with potential for improvement. :) |
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08/12/2004 03:59:06 AM |
| should have shot in the middle of the road |
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08/11/2004 02:19:18 PM |
| The stray head of grass is really annoying here, and surely serves no great purpose, but the thing that gets me is the lack of punch overall in the colours - just as the sky is washed out, so are the greens, becoming close to yellow in many places. The angle of shot you've chosen strikes me as odd - almost everything is in the left side of frame ... I find very little from image right that adds to the impact of this shot. Cropping out (or simply missing) the top of the nearest trees is a cardinal error, especially as there is plently of room at bottom of frame you could happily lose. It seems like a shot that is taken of a scene you know fits the challenge (and indeed, with great potential for a good photograph), but it really doesn't show much insight. That avenue of trees might make a fabulous image if you got in amongst it, and had it converging from both sides of frame, with a low evening light through them. contrast is lacking too - even sorting that out would add enormously to the impact of this shot. Sorry to be critical, but it's what I think. 4 |
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08/11/2004 12:03:12 PM |
| Nice photo. Too bad part of the plant got in the shot. I think it "breaks" the road up and is distracting. |
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08/11/2004 11:22:08 AM |
| I like your photo though I find the twig and the road sign distracting |
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08/11/2004 07:29:37 AM |
| Shame about the grass just infront of the lens. Maybe moving forward just beside the sign would have given a better picture. |
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08/11/2004 01:00:39 AM |
| This a an awesome shot; I would have liked to have seen it cropped a bit differently is all. |
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