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08/08/2004 01:33:52 PM |
| hmmm not sur about the pen. think the flowers and house was enough. A bit of background tint may have left an outline for the right side of the house? |
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08/07/2004 03:44:27 AM |
| well set up nice lighting |
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08/06/2004 11:22:46 AM |
| Not a big fan of b&w but this is nicely done. I'm not sure about the boarder though. |
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08/05/2004 11:10:28 PM |
| A classier pen would have bought you a higher vote. |
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08/05/2004 10:47:48 PM |
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08/05/2004 02:20:28 PM |
| great composition and technical quality. the subject isn't doing too much for me. Also, i wouldn't have bled the ribbon off the page |
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08/05/2004 02:15:05 PM |
| Lighting pushed to hard for my taste. |
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08/05/2004 10:10:15 AM |
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08/04/2004 10:12:18 PM |
| photographically good, except that I have not idea why you used a bic pen. |
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08/04/2004 05:57:18 PM |
| Alright, the house is cool, and the black and white is fine and dandy but the pen just turns me off. I don't think it belongs there with the house. I'm not sure exactly what could have gone better, but, just not the pen. |
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08/04/2004 05:16:17 AM |
| Simplicity is superb and aided greatly by expanse of clean white background and use of everyday biro to provide scale. Just the presence of that biro has me imaging this little house and flowers on someone's desk - a momento of a special day or trip - a muse they look at when needing a mental break. Nicely composed. 9 |
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08/04/2004 01:01:18 AM |
| The colored version can also look good. |
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