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04/17/2011 08:35:32 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Congrats on the top 20 slot in this challenge.
I think the idea of this is excellent. There's a lot to like about it. I do actually like the horizontal orientation, it's not what one might expect. I noted your comment about the pimple, that is something that the eye is drawn to.
I wonder whether this is ever so slightly underexposed? I somehow feel like the body should be a tiny bit brighter (ok, that's just me nit picking.)
The one thing I would change is the border. Several of your commenters have mentioned it and it bothers me too. I'm not entirely sure how I would feel if it were borderless, but somehow this border really gives the feeling that you have chopped the legs & head off. The use of borders is such a personal thing, but if you belong in the don't like camp, then the score can really take a bit of a hit. I typically like a subtle border, but in this case, I think this would benefit from not having a border.
Overall a very well done image that completely meets the challenge.
Sarah
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04/13/2011 11:51:45 AM |
| Congrats on the finish, you should be proud - great shot! |
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04/13/2011 01:03:41 AM |
by "border kills this one." do you mean in a good way or bad way?
 oldbimmercoupe
Message edited by author 2011-04-13 12:32:33. |
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04/12/2011 09:08:22 AM |
| Great shot, lovely lighting. Well done. |
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04/12/2011 05:36:38 AM |
| Always good to have something a bit different and I think this works well. |
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04/11/2011 07:19:47 PM |
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04/11/2011 04:53:17 PM |
| like this. maybe a tiny bit dark? |
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04/11/2011 11:19:34 AM |
| Very well taken. Not really my style of photo, but nevertheless well done. |
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04/10/2011 06:49:04 PM |
| Nice, I also like the border you chose |
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04/08/2011 01:39:39 AM |
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04/07/2011 08:43:08 AM |
| Nice idea, well carried out. |
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04/06/2011 12:24:51 PM |
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04/06/2011 11:45:24 AM |
| I like that you have portrayed a real woman... |
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04/06/2011 11:04:19 AM |
| I like the idea, but not the most flattering angle. |
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04/06/2011 09:34:03 AM |
| Oh ... Wonderfully done! Just enough... and not too much. (not voting) |
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04/06/2011 04:19:53 AM |
| A good study, and the way the color of the skin moves from the whiter/brighter bottom to the darker/warmer top is strong. I don't know quite what I think of the border. I find it distracting, but I don't know what I would think without it. |
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04/06/2011 12:41:00 AM |
| Love your deep dark moodiness of this |
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04/06/2011 12:20:36 AM |
| Great lighting, good work. |
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