Thanks for the comments everyone! I admit, everything I learned about editing, I learned starting with this photo, so hopefully I can only get better from here. The model is me, so getting the focus right was a challenge. But I'm happy with my finish. :)
Great effort. Nice eyes, good job on the skin. I think a levels adjustment on the silk to tone it down some and make it richer in colour would help. Also adding a subtle vignette to draw the viewer towards her face would be nice. Good luck
Certainly a great attempt and good results. I feel the eyes and lips are oversharpened. And compositionally, I feel that the left part of her face could have been included. It feels to me that something is missing that side. It may just be me.
beautiful model and good composition. my eyes are going outside of the frame because it looks flat. almost hi-key but i am not fond about the solid pink areas in the picture. 7/10