Critique Club
Composition - not aesthetically pleasing. There is no real point of view, and this is a very centered photo.
Exposure - For what you were trying for I'm guessing it's fine.
Color - color is what makes this picture. bright and beautiful
Focus - Though there may have been some focus when you tried to take this photo it was lost for two reasons, the fact that this object was moving per the challenge, but also because I think you hand held the camera, which caused the shake.
Background - boring, but good use of black
Fit for challenge - It definitely fits the challenge. There is a lot of motion in this picture!
Wowability - pretty cool, but typical of what I thought would be done.
Overall - I think this is not a very pleasing photograph to the eye. Though it fits the challenge with helped with placing, it doesn't really have much other point. If it was kids at a disco, I would have suggested taking this with a long exposure (preferably on a tripod) and then flashing the kids with a flash or lights or even a flashlight to put them in the pic as well.
Interesting abstract. I can see the movement in there. LOTS of movement actually. The angle and framing/cropping are good, and the colors are very nice as well. Great shot of motion. Good luck in the challenge.
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