DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register) 
 
Challenge Entries
Portfolio Images
Vaelen Confronts Darkness
Vaelen Confronts Darkness
HBunch


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study II (Classic Editing)
Collection: Challenge Entries
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 315
Location: Kitchen
Date: Dec 7, 2002
Galleries: Emotive, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Dec 7, 2002

 This is the sword of light and the sword of Darkness. Vaelen is the technical name. The swords match those in the poster. I got these swords at the Silver Leaf Ren faire in Galesburg MI. The darkness is intentional, as it is meant to be an evil confrontation. Enjoy!

Statistics
Place: 50 out of 67
Avg (all users): 5.4176
Avg (commenters): 5.3158
Avg (participants): 5.2623
Avg (non-participants): 5.7333
Views since voting: 5403
Votes: 91
Comments: 23
Favorites: 1 (view)

Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
 06/12/2004 09:50:36 PM
very nice comp.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/16/2002 09:16:46 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Heather, this is an excellent photo. Like I said in my original comment, I could see this on a game box or on a CD cover for sure :) I think the composition of the swords on the artwork background is excellent. Unfortunately, I can't really make any suggestions for improvement on this photo since I really like it the way it is. I read through your comments and I don't really understand where most of them are coming from. I couldn't think of a better way to light the swords or change anything about the composition. I suppose the 'artwork' factor may be at play, but it's an integral part of this image for sure...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/15/2002 11:31:23 PM
This is a great shot but the reflections on the sword hilts could have been avoided by changing the angle of the lights.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/15/2002 08:08:08 AM
This piece of art is constituing too much of the composition of this photograph, at least IMO - Inspzil
 12/14/2002 08:46:35 AM
It's not "my thing", but I like the placement of the knives so as not to block important parts of the art.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/12/2002 11:25:03 PM
excellent shot... I believe this could be the cover on a game box or a cd :) Great work... - setzler
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/12/2002 05:23:28 PM
?? Seems like I remember an admin note on this one ?? Wow, did this come as a set? The swords and the drawing seem to be the same! Well taken all the way around. 8 Swash
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/12/2002 04:54:06 PM
I DON'T LIKE THE PHOTO MUCH...JUST A PICTURE OF SOME ARTWORK
 12/12/2002 12:49:37 PM
Hmmm... nice lighting, and interesting composition. Fantasy genre stuff isn't my thing, but I appreciate that you have achieved something interesting here.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/12/2002 10:49:38 AM
Although this is technically a nice picture, the amount of activity going on in it is a bit distracting. The layout of the knives is good, but your highlights on them are a bit blown out. I was going to ask why you have both on there, and then I realized these are the swords the characters in the print are using.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/11/2002 08:45:58 PM
Its clever how you have created the effect here, you have balanced the composition well and the lighting is pretty even across the picture and the objects in the foreground.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/11/2002 01:10:31 PM
hi. neat swords. w hat is the story behind them?
 12/11/2002 11:18:03 AM
It is really amazing how all of these things are interacting with each other. It's tough to tell when the real world begins and ends, and I think that's largely because of the great lighting you've used. Very nice job.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/11/2002 01:23:30 AM
A bit too busy for my tastes. Good focus on the knives and certainly an interesting concept. DPz
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/10/2002 11:24:11 PM
Nice lighting, besides that this is just not my cup of tea, sorry.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/10/2002 09:21:36 PM
I really like the detail on the weapons, but the art in the background makes it less appealing to me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/10/2002 02:35:10 AM
Love this photo! I really like the darkness portrayed in the shot. The angle and framing/cropping are great too...oh...HAHA. It's my shot! (just being silly and seeing if this "comment on your own photo" thing works.
 12/09/2002 11:08:41 PM
I can't say that the subject matter does much for me, but the shot itself is ok. =7
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/09/2002 10:22:30 PM
Looks like the kit rae ads. Nicely replicated. Maybe a bit grainy though. overall not bad.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/09/2002 08:37:19 PM
nice composition with the swords from the picture on top of the picture. it looks like they are part of the picture, nice job.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/09/2002 07:19:55 PM
I don't know who she is.....but I wish I had her bod! LOL....neat collection.
 12/09/2002 02:59:53 PM
It's like Xena!
 12/09/2002 03:17:26 AM
I like the set up in this shot with those swords. However I think it would have been more effective with the light in a different position.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/25/2024 05:42:01 AM EDT.