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08/04/2004 03:46:45 AM |
As your one did scored way better than mine, could you comment on what you would have changed on my one?
other bulb/matche entry |
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08/03/2004 09:34:21 PM |
| Very clever and generally well done, though it would be nice to have caught the flame centered and obsure the candle just a bit more -- it's peeking out of the right side. |
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08/02/2004 09:43:05 PM |
| Clever idea and well executed (9) |
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08/01/2004 10:58:23 PM |
| Good concept,pity the flame was off centre.The orange glow around the top edges is a good effect too |
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08/01/2004 05:25:15 AM |
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08/01/2004 12:12:54 AM |
| I found the horizontal line at the back a distraction. I loved the thin red/orange trim within the bulb. Excellent theme. The main subject was bright and clear as daylight. |
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07/31/2004 09:40:30 PM |
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07/31/2004 08:48:32 PM |
Wowzers! This is a fabulous composition! Brilliant idea, superbly executed. The lighting, exposure, and focus are perfect. I love the two-tone background, it really makes this image stand out for me. The little rim of light visible around the globe of the bulb is cool too.
There are only a couple of small problems: The line between the black and white in the background is not quite horizontal, and it's a little ragged (not crisp enough). Also, the reflection of your ceiling light in the globe of the bulb is a bit distracting, though it took me a minute before I noticed it. And one last critique, there is a little bit of text on the bottom right side of the threads on the bulb, that clutters the otherwise supremely clean composition.
If those tiny problems didn't exist, this would be a 10. But, still, this is my favorite in the challenge! 9. |
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07/31/2004 01:34:23 PM |
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07/30/2004 07:03:01 PM |
| Good thinking. Very creative. Nicely done. |
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07/30/2004 06:33:30 PM |
| A good idea, well carried out! |
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07/30/2004 07:54:23 AM |
| Interesting composition, I look forward to learning how you did this... |
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07/29/2004 06:47:50 PM |
| Looked at this picture now for the 3ed time - gave it first 5 but is up to 7 now and I think that is where it will end up. |
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07/29/2004 12:49:15 PM |
I've already seen this somewhere...
//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=79034
Two problems on your one:
*slightly out of focus
*with that amount of light, we can easily see the matche behind. If seeing the matche is intentionnal, perhaps it would have been better placed in front of the bulb. |
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07/29/2004 08:10:02 AM |
| great idea; nice and simple. |
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07/28/2004 11:49:54 PM |
| Ceiling fan in the reflection? Amatch in the background? Cool idea. |
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07/28/2004 08:26:11 PM |
| Clever! I wish the flame were going straight up - the angle gives the impression of wind inside the bulb which, for me, breaks the illusion. |
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07/28/2004 06:39:36 PM |
| would have been better to have a crisp edge between the black & white background |
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07/28/2004 06:15:09 PM |
OK - when the votes are up I'd like to hear how you did this.
The red glow and the candle flame are really wierd - love it.
Top marks |
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07/28/2004 02:35:28 PM |
| Interesting concept ! At least something different ! |
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07/28/2004 04:49:23 AM |
| imaginative idea. Almost pulled it of. |
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