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Challenge: Chocolate (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-3000Z
Location: my kitchen studio
Date: Jul 20, 2004
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/15
Date Uploaded: Jul 20, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 81 out of 202
Avg (all users): 5.2206
Avg (commenters): 5.6000
Avg (participants): 5.0435
Avg (non-participants): 5.3111
Views since voting: 845
Views during voting: 450
Votes: 340
Comments: 13
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/27/2004 11:56:47 PM
Like to see a little more diffuse light coming in from the left to help illuminate the label and glass some more. It might get rid of some of the shadow cast by the bottle too
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07/27/2004 11:39:42 AM
Don't go drink and Godriva.
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07/27/2004 01:55:55 AM
there's another photo similar to this one, check it out
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07/27/2004 01:09:03 AM
a wee too bright on the paper, I think it's just the odd lighting used
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07/25/2004 09:33:13 PM
Way too dark. Could have been great.
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07/25/2004 12:43:44 PM
Looks a bit like an advertisement for this drink but I think it needs some improvement in setup and technically for you to be able to sell this image to the company. Think 1/2 or 1 stop longer exposure would have given a better expression and then you can add more contrast, probably you need a better lightning. Also the WB should without a doubt be much warmer. The image needs tighter croping from above and from left. About the setup; the bag and the background paper have obviously been under to much usage to give good expression and are rather distracting.
But good experiment.
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07/25/2004 07:47:14 AM
you've arranged the items well, I like the bit of space empty to the right, would like the background a bit blurred (the lighting here is great), a bit more space under the glass and A crisper bag (perhaps the other side of the bag w/o the fold?). a touch more light on the bottle to bring out details (but keep that partial shadow as it adds interest) Good luck with your shot!
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07/23/2004 04:38:48 PM
I like the idea. I think just the bottle and the glass would of been enough.
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07/23/2004 12:13:35 PM
the shadows in the wrong places detract from this. But a good subject, and nice composition.
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07/22/2004 09:45:13 AM
To much "godiva". I would have cropped out more of the right side removing most that hotspot from your picture or maybe even cropping the right side centering the glass. <6> with the crop suggestions in my opinion would have been at least an <8>
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07/21/2004 10:21:53 AM
Step back one pace, then shoot. We need the whole bottle and glass in the picture, otherwise this is an excellent shot.
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07/21/2004 04:19:09 AM
Elegant... I hope the rest of the voters see that it is chocolate liqueur. I see there is more than the glas missing :) You would have do well if you shapened the image some more. I love the concept though. (7)
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07/21/2004 01:10:41 AM
Seems a bit off-balance. Maybe a tighter crop would work.
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