Critique Club
Composition This shot is too centered and I dont think taking it through the net helps. There is motion in it but not enough!
Camera work Metering could be better as the overall shot is dark and a little flat although there is good saturation of the colours. The fact that it was shot through the net is adding to the darkness of the shot
Digital processing Perhaps playing with the levels could have brightened this a bit.
My Opinion I felt that subject was good but angles and lighting was not as well thought out as it could have been.
I like the subject of the shot, but it doesn\'t really convey any significant motion. The motion taking place is insignificant. The shot is a little dark, and putting the subject dead center doesn\'t seem like the best composition for this. Perhaps if he were at the far right side with the field laid out before him it would be more interesting. And while I'm sure it was unavoidable, the net hanging in front of him is distracting. This shot needs some technical improvement, but it has a lot of potential to it. Good luck to you. 3
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