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07/27/2004 09:57:56 AM |
| Hmmm, interesting ;) I like the references |
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07/27/2004 05:20:49 AM |
Good: background - DOF - idea and setup
Bad: crop, too much space at the bottom - melted chocolate dose not look appealing. |
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07/27/2004 02:18:32 AM |
| Having a hard time getting the sense of where the focus is to be. It looks the sharpest on the bricks, but I think a bit more DOF would bring it all into view, since there are so many things that are competing for my eyes attention. Diffusing the light off to the left may help get rid of the harshness to it also. |
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07/26/2004 08:39:40 PM |
| DOF is too shallow for a still life. Use a tripod, slower shutter and higher aperture. |
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07/26/2004 12:18:01 PM |
| I think a different andgle (taking the shot from higher) would work better. The idea is cool, but there's too much space on the bottom and the subjects are very much OOF (out of focus). Sorry... (2) |
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07/25/2004 12:59:06 PM |
| Tighter cropin from below and more contrast wouldn´t have hurt. |
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07/23/2004 01:20:48 PM |
| Quite the collection! I think this would be improved by cropping out all the blue cloth below the edge fold. Also, the set up could be done more artistically I think. Laying the chocolate bar down flat doesn't help it. I think it might have been improved with a higher up camera angle. |
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07/22/2004 11:39:50 AM |
| Too much blue in the bottom, the fruits are out of focus, i would prefer a bigger DOF. This will not change my vote but isn't it too much explicit? :-) |
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07/22/2004 02:57:45 AM |
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07/21/2004 10:51:59 PM |
| Too much negative space at the bottom of the photo. |
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07/21/2004 01:49:18 PM |
Very suggestive :-)
Although somewhat out of focus :-( |
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07/21/2004 10:15:32 AM |
| Somewhat out of focus, The bottom blue part could have been cropped out. |
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07/21/2004 04:53:32 AM |
| more DOF.. this would be an excellent composition if your F stop was a bit higher. |
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07/21/2004 04:33:38 AM |
| tighter crop at the bottom would have helped this quite a bit, I think. focus is a little soft for my taste (or DOF too shallow, hard to tell). You might get nicer definition if you save the JPG with less compression / at higher quality. |
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07/21/2004 02:00:41 AM |
| I think leaving some space at the top would have been better than leaving it at the bottom... |
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07/21/2004 01:55:18 AM |
| I´m think your picture needs a little more of focus on the back, anyway nice idea. |
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07/21/2004 01:26:25 AM |
| Too top heavy. Crop out a bit more of the bottom. |
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