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When i grow up, i want to be like.....
When i grow up, i want to be like.....
pichichib


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Challenge: Portrait with Chair (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Nikon D90
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6D ED
Location: Antigua Guatemala
Date: Sep 16, 2010
Aperture: f.4.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/125s
Galleries: Black and White, Children
Date Uploaded: Sep 19, 2010

this is an unedited picture, with focal lenght 95 mm aperture. I try to capture what is the little boy thinking or doing, he just stood there beside his mom.

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Place: 48 out of 71
Avg (all users): 5.3012
Avg (commenters): 5.2000
Avg (participants): 5.0571
Avg (non-participants): 5.3411
Views since voting: 576
Views during voting: 470
Votes: 249
Comments: 6
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10/05/2010 04:34:39 AM
Hello from the Critique Club.
First looking at your photo, youíve included a chair, and while youíve included a person, but they arenít posed in a traditional fashion for portraiture. More specifically, and as others have noted as well, we cannot see the boys face. A big part of portraiture is who is in the picture, showing us their face is key to this. As far as your title goes, I think including the mother would have been a more successful approach to depicting this. If she was the subject, we would see an important part of her life- that of being a parent. We can all relate to this and understand it readily, and those glances that people give their children are often exceptional for captures like this because they show adults doing things they rarely do- being silly, making faces, or being more expressive than usual. Regarding technical details, I think your photo is strong and well done. Contrast is pretty good throughout, and I like the lines of the bench leading us towards where the boy is looking. The reflection on the car in the background is slightly distracting, but not overly so. Iíll echo Lydia on this as well, that this photo would have been better served for a different challenge.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/28/2010 02:11:30 PM
I wish I could see what he's looking at. I think it would add to the photo. Great shot though
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09/27/2010 11:01:46 PM
very pretty
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09/24/2010 09:34:42 AM
I like the photo, but without his face is doesn't make much of a portrait.
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09/23/2010 07:40:31 PM
Like what?
09/22/2010 12:42:05 PM
A portrait, in my opinion, shows the face of the person. I like this... but not really well for the challenge.
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