There's a lot of noise visible in the man's shirt and hair... not sure if this is in the original, or due to post-processing -- either way, distracting.
the guy is a bit out of focus, but the type fits the words very well. So he adds to the picture. Nice shot, great tag. Did you set it up or just found it on the way?
I think you should have had your model stop in a walking pose, so he's a bit more in focus... and if this was a random street shot, perhaps you should have considered a model? I don't quite see how the wall and the newspaper go together... if this was a tabloid, perhaps that should have been made more evident.
I love this type of "slice of real life" shot. Seems like it could use a little level to darken a bit. Looks like a crop of a small part of a larger picture with the grain on the man and paper.