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12/09/2002 01:10:46 PM |
~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
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*Composition (content)*
The composition of this shot really works. The contrast of the white clothes line against the fabulous blue is perfect. Even the clothes pins orientation work, they move the eye from left to right and add interest to the top of the shot. The quilts location and angle is good as the right side of the quilt lines up almost perfect with the edge of the picture.
*Background*
Not much there :-) The color of the sky and its gradient from dark to light is very nice. The sky is clean and free of noise.
*Camera Work (Technical)*
The only slight drawback I see technically is that you may have let just a little to much light in. The white on the quilt in a few areas seems just a tad too white.
*Digital Processing (technical)*
Sharpening is OK (slight trace of over sharpening at the bottom of the quilt).
Balance between light and dark is excellent.
Compression is good (no jpeg artifacts)
*My opinion*
I liked this picture during voting and still like it. It tells a story and meets the challenge real well. Keep up the good work!
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12/09/2002 11:28:40 AM |
| What happened??? this was my #1 pick tp be the winner. How did iy end up way down here at 37???11 |
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12/08/2002 04:13:53 PM |
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12/08/2002 09:33:22 AM |
| Very nice. Sky is wonderful. I assume you use a polorizer. |
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12/06/2002 11:55:12 PM |
| Nice quilt. Looks hand made. Beautiful. Photo really nice. Beautiful colors. Nice composition and nice execution. Like how it's cropped. Good focus and this is something hard to focus evenly, just by it's combinations. Good job. PTL 8 |
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12/06/2002 05:11:01 PM |
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12/05/2002 09:25:20 PM |
| Simple, clean, crisp -- beautiful, and great for the challenge. You must have pulled that clothesline incredibly taut to be that straight -- great job. 8) muckpond |
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12/05/2002 06:13:23 PM |
| the composition is very good..the pattern of the quilt balances out the blue sky and clothes line. |
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12/05/2002 12:45:21 PM |
| The blue background is perfect. I can't tell if it's the sky with a polarizing filter or an artificial background, but it is good. |
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11/28/2002 07:59:18 PM |
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12/04/2002 12:24:00 AM |
| I love the color of the sky and the gradation (is that a word) in it. The lighting on the quilt seems a bit harsh - which is common in outdoor shots. Was it afternoon? The white is just a little too bright maybe. I like the idea. I thought of something similar using little children's clothes, but it's just TOO cold outside. Not sure about the angle. Seems maybe a little too slanted tho I wouldn't shoot it straight on of course. Overall, it fits the challenge and is well done technically. Nothing jumps out as being bad. The subject is just a bit too unemotional maybe when you have to look at SOoooooo many pictures. I'm sure it doesn't get enough attention from the average voter. I love quilts :o) ~indi |
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12/03/2002 11:25:00 PM |
| Like a breath of fresh air! Great compostion. Beautiful sky. A+ on originality. |
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12/03/2002 08:28:00 PM |
| so that's what the amish use their phone lines for. the off center diagonal composition works very well, and the dark blue and white of the quilt contrasted with the lighter blue of the sky is really pretty. good show. 8 |
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12/03/2002 08:59:00 AM |
| good shot and great title |
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12/02/2002 08:48:00 PM |
| I like the lines and the angles. Jacko. |
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12/02/2002 08:47:00 PM |
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12/02/2002 07:15:00 PM |
| Simple, and beautiful, with good colors, lines and does a good job of evoking blue. I love it! Really beautiful job on photographing a simple object and making it look beautiful! Did you make the quilt? Very nice... a 9! |
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12/02/2002 06:46:00 PM |
| WOW.....great colors on that blue background. I really like this shot. Less is more here. Well done. Justine |
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12/02/2002 05:26:00 PM |
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12/02/2002 12:17:00 PM |
| i love the simplisity. very nice. and great composition. : ) LM |
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12/02/2002 11:48:00 AM |
| a bit over-polarized don't you think? but a terrific composition and it's sharp as a tack! |
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12/02/2002 10:35:00 AM |
I smell the fresh, blue air!
Great color and variation of blue! 9 |
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12/02/2002 09:05:00 AM |
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12/02/2002 08:24:00 AM |
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12/02/2002 02:33:00 AM |
| Smooth color in the background, nice shot overall, well done. |
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12/02/2002 01:27:00 AM |
| are there memories in this quilt? why is it blue? color is not essence |
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