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Challenge: Advertisement Revisited (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Canon EOS-10D
Location: Bellingham, WA
Date: Jul 6, 2004
Aperture: f8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Jul 6, 2004

Photographed an antigue Waterman's Ideal fountain pen and bottle of ink. Used Curves to brighten the whole image and unsharp mask to sharpen it.

Statistics
Place: 76 out of 218
Avg (all users): 5.2961
Avg (commenters): 6.1667
Avg (participants): 5.1359
Avg (non-participants): 5.3781
Views since voting: 935
Views during voting: 355
Votes: 304
Comments: 12
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2004 09:22:51 PM
Nicely composed but product/brand not prominent enough for an ad.
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07/13/2004 12:40:31 AM
A blotter would have added to this setting.
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07/12/2004 04:33:23 PM
A nice photograph. My main complain is that the label on the ink you are advertising is very dark and thus doesn't really stand out. 6
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07/11/2004 12:05:45 PM
I can't see the label very clearly, it's essential for advertising!
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07/09/2004 12:24:37 AM
I like the idea of your photo, but I think a different background would have worked better.
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07/08/2004 09:43:03 PM
Presumably, the product is the ink, and a client would not stand for an old, stained, chipped example of their product to be featured in their advertisement. The photography, however is really outstanding!
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07/08/2004 11:26:18 AM
This creates a nice nostalgic feel which compliments the brand very well. Nice job with that. It's a picky point, and maybe my monitor just needs calibration but the lable on the ink bottle seems too dark. Lighting it a bit more might have improved the image.
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07/08/2004 06:29:43 AM
Great shot! Just the bubble in the cloth and the stains on the label take a little away. Old bottle though. You can be very proud of this!
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07/07/2004 12:07:57 PM
More light on the label would make it easier to read. Nice composition though.
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07/07/2004 11:13:25 AM
I like the shot - but I wish the empty part of the bottle was clean. I'm not a neat-freak or anything, but it seems too distracting to me.
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07/07/2004 10:23:01 AM
Great shot. Would have been even better if the wrinkles in the cloth were taken out.
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07/07/2004 05:45:09 AM
nice light, but the bottle is too used for a ad shot
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