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The Offer of the Hatmaker
The Offer of the Hatmaker
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Challenge: Advertisement Revisited (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ1
Location: Budapest, Hungary
Date: Jul 4, 2004
Aperture: f:8
ISO: 150
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Candid, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Jul 4, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 206 out of 218
Avg (all users): 3.7975
Avg (commenters): 3.8667
Avg (participants): 3.5982
Avg (non-participants): 3.9069
Views since voting: 812
Views during voting: 399
Votes: 316
Comments: 15
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2004 09:03:25 PM
has a good feel - would inspire a good copywriter
07/13/2004 01:33:28 PM
Original and well observed. Nice composition. Maybe some more contrast and saturation would have improved the impression. Anyway, - I like it!
07/13/2004 12:43:40 AM
Needs a lot more contrast. Also, I just don't get it. How would this be an advertisement?
07/12/2004 02:53:57 PM
Would be much better with a little more contrast.
07/11/2004 02:51:34 PM
very contrasty. lacks saturation.
07/11/2004 04:34:45 AM
Contrast isn't right for me... other than that the hair under the plume looks just like my beard.
07/10/2004 09:58:07 AM
A little washed out, but a great composition!
07/09/2004 11:29:04 AM
not enough darks
07/08/2004 05:41:13 PM
Needs to be sharper and a little better focus? Maybe a color feather? Does not not grab me and make me interested in the hat.
07/08/2004 09:41:39 AM
To overexposed so it has lost a lot of its crispness, Maybe play with the contrast a bit more.
07/08/2004 06:24:51 AM
The title doesn't sound much like advertising copy. I don't get it. The photo is very washed out and drab. If the hats are the products, they don't look attractive enough that I'd want one. For one thing, the hat on the person's head has grit and lint in the brim. The person's grizzled, dry, grey hair isn't too lovely either.
07/07/2004 09:35:45 PM
Contrast seems a bit dark. Nothing overly interesting to portray the hats though.
07/07/2004 11:05:36 AM
try to adjust level a little...
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07/07/2004 12:58:01 AM
The images is overexposed (my monitor is very preciesly calibrated), and lacks a punch.
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07/07/2004 12:28:07 AM
this is so washed out, it makes it hard to focus on the hats.
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