I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 1 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:
I'm a sucker for purple. A nicely done studio shot, but something in the model's look seems a little forced to me. It lacks, in my eyes, JUST that amount of emotion needed to really grip me. However, of course, DPC doesn't really look for that. I'd imagine this is doing fairly well.