Nice bright and sharp - Maybe pulling the green feathers in tighter might have enabled you to crop it a little tighter as I find all the white at the top a little distracting
I've decided to comment on every shot in this challenge, since I'm sitting at 0 comments, and I'd rather try and take a positive approach to this rather than simply whining about my score:
A nice, if somewhat static, studio shot. There's some energy here (especially in the hair), and the primary color work is wonderful, but there's a certain lack of soul... of being. I'm also not certain what it is you want to sell. Considering the "product shot" nature of the photo, I feel that I should want to purchase something the model is presenting, but I'm at a loss as to what that is. The outfit? The hairstyle? The costume jewelery?
Whimsical, colorful, great attention to detail, other than the stem of the peacock feather sticking out all bare and ugly. Could easily have been cloned out, or had the feather turned the opposite way.