Interesting crop, I like the way you handled the R edge, & all the dusky darkness in this (I can't call it negative space, it's too alive). Here's a Gilded Lily for you!
I quite enjoy these sorta shots. The tones are rich and the texture of the petals really pop. Working with the shallow DOF, I also think the point of focus also works really well. Some might say it's too centered but it doesn't detract much if any.