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04/21/2010 03:41:24 PM |
| You know, looking at ths, I don't really know what to suggest. You have many elements that improve a photo... women in good shape, slight DoF effect, and it meets the challenge. But I would say that for some reason things are not active or dynamic enough. Lighting up the left subject's face would have really added to things, but required an additional strobe. Concept is good though. |
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03/24/2010 12:33:45 AM |
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03/23/2010 04:02:35 PM |
| Interesting shot. I like the lighting in this photo. The well lit face of the girl standing next to the car adds interest. When I look at this shot I am wondering "what is she thinking". |
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03/23/2010 12:08:02 PM |
| Of course mustangs break down :D I like the narrative in this one. |
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03/21/2010 11:45:51 PM |
| So much impact in this shot. Girl in front is in perfect focus. DOF adds a lot. The lighting creates a lot of impact too. Awesome. |
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03/21/2010 02:07:20 PM |
| I like that you are thinking w/ a concept, but would exclude the top half of the image as it does nothing for you. |
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03/20/2010 12:55:07 PM |
| this has a very cinematic feel - you really could have played that aspect up by shooting in landscape |
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03/20/2010 12:14:45 PM |
| I like this as a picture with a compelling story. I guess it is a setup, if so, your models did a great acting job, their expressions and body languare are convincing, it does not look fake at all. I suspect you will get a bunch of low votes as it is not an eye candy DPC type image, but it is probably the only picture in the challenge with a great story. You made great use of the available light and picked the perfect aperture for a very pleasing dof. My only suggestion would be to crop out a bit of the negative space atop, although some may argue that the big dark sky above adds to the feeling of being stuck in a bad situation. Great job, I hope I am not your only 10. |
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03/20/2010 01:36:29 AM |
| Nice. this is the kind of shot that suits B&W. I'd have given it a square crop too, just to see how it looked. 7 |
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03/19/2010 03:35:55 PM |
| Picturre of my nightmare! Good one. |
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03/18/2010 11:33:42 PM |
| Tells a story. The woman in the background appears ticked off at the one in the foreground. |
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03/18/2010 10:51:30 PM |
Bah.. Mustangs don't break.. grin.
good job capturing the mood, and I like how the lighting hits the women. |
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03/18/2010 07:11:45 PM |
| ATT I guess... nice picture |
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03/18/2010 07:14:51 AM |
| Unique idea. Nice shot of everyday life. |
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03/17/2010 01:22:49 PM |
| Nice light and nice story. If they were my girls, I'd tell them to stay in the car. Good job. |
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03/17/2010 07:15:51 AM |
| Fantastic! Some of the different one's i've seen in this challenge! 8 |
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03/17/2010 07:13:57 AM |
| Wait...Mustangs do not break down, especially the GT models. A 1 from me! (not) |
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