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03/23/2010 01:54:01 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression: When I first saw this picture I thought it fit the challenge well but might be a little out of focus.
Composition: The only thing I would change in terms of composition is to take a little space off the top, the background near the top is a little distracting. Little Miss Muffet is placed good and is sitting straight. It looks like it may have been taken on your bed and it looks like it has resulted in the bottle tilting slightly to the right.
Subject: Fits the challenge perfectly, a baby doll's bottle and Miss Muffet are both children's toys but are not related.
Technical: As mentioned in your comments your picture would have benefited from some contrast. It seems soft as well but that may be a personal choice. It gives a childhood dream quality to it.
Final thoughts: Ahhh you got beat up pretty hard by voters but don't let that get you down. Best of luck in future challenges!
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Senay |
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03/15/2010 09:34:27 PM |
| Looks like she drank all the milk! |
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03/11/2010 11:52:27 AM |
| I believe this needs a little more focus and contrast. |
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03/10/2010 02:49:16 PM |
| Cute idea. I think the bottle needed to be straight and needed some milk. |
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