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12/14/2013 07:14:40 PM |
| love the kid, love the colours. |
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03/03/2010 08:57:10 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Congrats on entering your first of what I know will be many entries here at DP Challenge. Not a bad shot for your first entry and certainly better than what I entered.
Interesting scene laid out here and it definitely tells a story. The connection to the challenge isn't immediately apparent from the photo itself so the title had to be used to reinforce what you are going for. Generally (in my opinion anyways), if you need to use your title to tell the viewer why it fits the challenge they probably aren't going to be convinced anyways.
Challenge aside the shot does have potential. The boy's eyes take you straight across the frame to the spider on the left. The shed itself has interesting verticals.
I like the panaramic crop as it does work with the scene as you've presented it. The use of the border is ok here in my opinion. Borders are used to help contain the image so it stands out from the grey (in the case of DPC) background. Its a good thickness too and doesn't detract from the image.
Unfortunately the biggest issue with this image is the background. You have a very bright object in the background and an object in a very distracting blue tarp. Tough to frame a shot and keep an eye on all those things but in some cases your background is even more important than your subject or at least just as important. Remember, just because your aren't setting up all the elements doesn't mean you don't get to decide where they are when you look through the view finder. (i.e. move your feet!)
Not too shabby for your first time. Keep shooting and we all look forward to your next submission! |
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03/03/2010 04:07:07 PM |
Thanks to everyone who commented. I completely agree with the criticisms made and would not have composed the photo in such a location if I had a choice. I am not particularly good at, or inspired by, taking photos in a staged setting. That’s not to say I don’t appreciate the skills and efforts achieved by those that do. I carry my old, beat-up cameral with me everywhere and try and capture moments that are special (to me at least) and not staged. I focusing on this spider hoping it would do something interesting while it was leaving its hiding hole to escape the hot tin shed. My three year old son, after proudly stealing my hat off me, came over to see what had my attention. He had inherited my wife’s arachnophobia and I managed to quickly grab this photo just before (and accurately predicted by aliqui) he ran away.
I really liked this photo as it caught the moment of realisation of something scary in his garden. I also feel that the voting was fair for my photo (especially in comparison to some of the great photos submitted). Hopefully, one day I’ll invest in some PP software and better equipment to improve my photo outcomes, but more importantly, learn from the comments made of my shots and the skills of those that I judge. My first challenge was more than a little fun.
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03/03/2010 05:58:45 AM |
I can't say I'm terribly surprised this photo didn't do well here, but there's something about it that I love. The composition is oddly inspiring.
Keep submitting! Ta heck with voters. |
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03/02/2010 08:51:54 AM |
| Well spotted. If I may, I'd have gotten the child closer (if possible) to the green siding and made both he and the spider more prominent with less BG clutter. |
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03/01/2010 03:56:15 PM |
| Neat idea, too much distance. Overbright background. |
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02/28/2010 11:53:53 AM |
| I like the perspective that this wide composition gives. Nice job. |
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02/24/2010 04:23:40 AM |
That's right, hold on to your hat and run, kid!
Cute photo. There's a bit of an awkward composition, but it works very well here. You're immediately drawn to the cuteness, but then wonder, "What's the little tyke looking at?" Your eyes travel across the full length of the photo and then, surprise, "...holy crap, that's huge!" |
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