beautiful colors, nice exposure and composition. Only one thing bothers me and I know it couldnt be helped. But that bit of string over his face is distracting.
Great shot for the local paper! I would score the next step up if there was just a little more punch of colors and less shadows, and that the line streaking down the man's face is distracting to the overall quality.
Cool picture...a couple thoughts, it is a candid but if it was really to be a print in a newspaper I might have had the guy with the pole hold the fishing line so that it didn't come across his face and I my have repositioned the older gentleman so the pole was not in front of his face. I might have also cropped a bit from the left. Good clear picture though.
Too bad about the fishing line across his face, and the dark shadows. I would also have asked the man at the back to move aside - his dark shadows detract (in my humble opinion) from the image. Good title and shot concept though.