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Challenge: Pieces of the Human Form (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Pentax K10D
Lens: Pentax DA 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 AF
Location: My Back Yard, Statesboro, GA
Date: Jan 31, 2010
Aperture: F/4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Emotive, Self Portrait
Date Uploaded: Jan 31, 2010

RAW to Jpeg Conversion in Adobe RAW 4.2, Cropped, Duplicated Layer, Sepia Filter with Luminosity Blending, Stamped Visible, Duplicated Layer, Converted to Black & White (Portrait) with Overlay Blending, Stamped Visible, Merged Visible, Resized, Duplicated Layer, Auto-Sharpened, Quick Select Tool to Lift the Background to Another Layer, Guassian Blur on Background Layer, Brightness & Contrast Adjustment, Magic Wand to Highlight and to Feather the Background, Blur Tool to Minimize the Line Between the Background and the Foreground, Stamped Visible, Merged Visible, Saved for Web...

Statistics
Place: 46 out of 109
Avg (all users): 5.7069
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.6786
Avg (non-participants): 5.7203
Views since voting: 896
Views during voting: 304
Votes: 174
Comments: 2
Favorites: 0


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02/12/2010 07:46:49 PM
Critique Club here...

I think you did a great job conveying the message here, and you might very well have gotten some low votes because of it.

I like the choice of the diagonal composition. I think the texture of the hand is a bit strong, it jumped out at me. I'm not a fan of the foreground blur, I wish the full hand was in focus. Given the choice, I would rather have seen the nails out of focus. Speaking of which, they aren't very believable - larger ones or better yet, spikes, would have helped sell the image.

If I had voted in this challenge, I would have given this a 6 because I thought it met the challenge very well.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/01/2010 12:04:33 AM
might have been stronger as a black and white, but well done anyway 7
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