GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
My goodness you get around this country of ours. San Francisco for our famous bridge, and now a ship in Texas... What a pretty model you found for this interesting portrait. Nice processing on her face and she posed very well for you.
My first impression of this portrait (as a Critique Club member) was "what is that brown out-of-focus thing on the left?" It took a moment to get to the main attraction - your model. To make this a really successful image, you might think about de-emphasizing the ship's wheel to focus on what is, I think, your main subject.
It is good to see your work again, and I look forward to more images from you.
I hope this brief critique was helpful to you.
Alice
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