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06/27/2004 06:05:49 PM |
Effectively desat'ed, nice tonal range in the b/w. I think that you would have more impact (oomph) if you would have left only one car in color.
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06/27/2004 08:50:40 AM |
| Very nice!! I like the open trunk, nice touch. |
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06/26/2004 02:12:13 AM |
| Intersting. Too bad about the open trunk throwing off the rythm of the picture. |
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06/24/2004 02:15:48 PM |
| Nice idea. The tight cropping and overhead view makes for an interesting abstract composition. I would suggest elevating the contrast first, perhaps darken some of the greys, saturating the yellow, and then move on to the selective desaturation. As it is now, the yellow really doesn't quite pop and there are just too many middle values and not enough lights and darks to really make this composition sing. Also, even though there may have been five yellow cars on the lot, it may have been more interesting if you had just selected the one with the trunk open to really make a strong statement. The yellow placement in this composition is just rather random. Nice effort. |
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06/23/2004 10:45:11 PM |
| Very unusual and graphic, almost an ad for a taxi company. Compositon, exposure great. |
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06/22/2004 08:43:24 PM |
| Very nice composition. I really like the angle you chose. Nice job. |
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06/21/2004 08:26:56 PM |
| Amusing. The open trunk gives this an edge ... |
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06/21/2004 06:48:21 PM |
| A little more yellow saturation would have made this shot come alive! |
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06/21/2004 04:55:43 PM |
| Good use of the challenge technique, very sharp looking. This could be a great advertisement. |
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06/21/2004 04:18:24 PM |
| This is one of my favs. The desaturation defenitily adds something to the picture. |
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06/21/2004 02:51:44 PM |
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06/21/2004 12:34:02 PM |
| more selective with the cloring and it would have worked great. nice idea. |
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