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01/30/2010 08:47:50 PMPost actions
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Very eye catching photo! During voting I gave this a 7. A little of the left side could be cut off, placing the planes in more of a rule of thirds positioning. The red planes against the blue sky is very nice! The only thing I didn't like about this picture is the smoke trails being a darker grey colour. The only way I see to improve this image would be to have turned the smoke trails a more white colour. I see it's your second highest rated photo, congratulations!
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Comments Made During the Challenge
01/28/2010 03:09:15 AMPost actions
This is absoluteluy awesome. I would crop a bot off at right - tiny bit. Light on th ered of arrows are just the cherry. lovely angle. You got a winner here in my books with aviation type pics 8
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01/27/2010 10:51:19 PMPost actions
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01/27/2010 09:13:11 PMPost actions
Another strong entry--amazing pilots!
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01/27/2010 07:54:08 PMPost actions
Such symmetry and color - can't beat it! Great shot.
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01/27/2010 02:41:56 PMPost actions
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01/26/2010 10:11:38 PMPost actions
EXCELLENT !! will make a great poster , 8
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01/26/2010 09:05:37 PMPost actions
quite the spectacular show, would really like to see one of these some day...super clear, crisp shot...well done
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01/26/2010 09:27:03 AMPost actions
It's hard to tell exactly what you did but the saturation levels look a little strange and it could be due to burning. For me you could have pulled way way back on the post processing and I would have been fine with the shot.
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01/26/2010 03:42:28 AMPost actions
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01/25/2010 03:50:12 PMPost actions
I love the composition, well done!
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01/25/2010 03:47:34 PMPost actions
really dark feel to all this
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01/25/2010 09:13:57 AMPost actions
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01/24/2010 03:09:05 PMPost actions
Wonderful composition & capture. I really like the way the sun is shining on the planes.....8
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01/23/2010 10:02:45 PMPost actions
Wow! Great capture, and the curve starting in the upper left just does a perfect job of leading the eye to the ultimate target. 9
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01/23/2010 02:59:09 PMPost actions
Very cool, good exposure and composition.
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01/23/2010 02:00:47 PMPost actions
I love airshows, nice capture. Just a tad heavy on the blue saturation.
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01/22/2010 11:32:19 PMPost actions
Looks like one of those motivational posters. Nice shot. That being said, the processing of the colors has introduced some noise in the sky to my eye.
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01/22/2010 06:32:04 PMPost actions
Very well composed and very sharp.
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01/22/2010 05:28:00 PMPost actions
You did this so well. I found it very hard to shoot planes like this. Also your color is very nice.
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01/22/2010 12:28:10 PMPost actions
love the colors, really great capture 8
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01/22/2010 10:13:46 AMPost actions
I often times find these aerial shots boring but this is so well done. Nice one.
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