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07/04/2004 01:15:05 PM |
Critique Club:
A very competent shot, nicely exposed. The centred composition works very well. A good candidate for selective desaturation, and it has been carried out well. Border complements the photo well. I like the diagonal composition, and black and white really complements the texture of the can.
However, your choice of subject doesn't really hit me with a 'wow'... rather a solid, well taken photo that makes me respect the technique used. |
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06/27/2004 05:24:09 AM |
Nice sharp focus and great contrast with excellent exposure! I would've aligned the tab at 45° myself, good decision. Also, I like how the edges of the can are cropped out, though some may not. 8 for you. |
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06/25/2004 06:29:56 PM |
Certainly a nice enough picture - great razor sharp focus. However, you have a green pull top and the rest is normally a greyscalled metal. What every you desaturated isn't recognizable. |
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06/25/2004 12:16:11 PM |
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06/24/2004 09:13:22 AM |
Good clarity and contrast. Excellent green color. |
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06/24/2004 08:53:15 AM |
gotta ask really, did you do any post photo taking edittting, or are all the colours natural? if that is straight out the camera, then i think it's great. if it's editting, i think it's even greater because the sharpness of the edge of colour, and the shades of the green is terrifically well done. great take on the challenge. 9. |
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06/22/2004 08:47:09 PM |
Composition? excellent. Exposure?, excellent. Clarity? excellent. Iinteresting? you made it so. Really well done saturation effect. |
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06/22/2004 11:48:13 AM |
This is nice - I hate to say it because I am usually a border basher but it might look nice with that thin border line in green. |
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06/22/2004 12:26:56 AM |
Very simple. Ilike it a lot. One thing about it that's great, it is looks naturally desaturated. I'm not sure if it is or not, but it looks like if I were to buy a can like that, you've presented it exactly how I'd see it. 8. |
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06/21/2004 03:57:59 PM |
No thanks, I have to drive! |
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06/21/2004 06:47:26 AM |
Pretty darn nice. I like it. |
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06/21/2004 02:00:50 AM |
Nice choice, however, without knowing the challenge theme, this picture could easily be considered full color. It isn't "obvious" parts were greyscaled. |
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