I see camera movement and coffee that has been sitting around long enough to start to form a milky crust. I don't see a purpose for the camera movement, and the crust doesn't add anything to the appeal of the photo.
With the exception of the blown out glare on the lower right, I think your exposure is decent.
insteresting choice of subject, would have worked great with 3 things, better focus, closer crop - not showing the brim of the glass and taking the shot right after the coffee was made!
Technically this is not good. Compositionally this is not good. It is essential that macros be in very precise focus and not just an out of focus blurb such as this. Terrible terrible macro.
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